The VIP

By : Icarus
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‘He is very important’ the Thammasat professors had told Catherine. So much so that he couldn’t even come to our house. I pooh poohed it gently. She listened to me then, and when he called was a little severe, cryptic down the line, requiring him meet her before any terms were agreed. He suggested a restaurant and she elected ‘The rib room’ upstairs at The Landmark.

They met for dinner with his young second wife, ex soap super-star, who was the student, as it turned out, but did not really want to learn English beyond mitigating the embarrassment and tedium of international parties. Inauspicious, though it was Chinese new year, and they stuffed a red envelope with crisp thousands which Catherine carried home, slightly disapprovingly, for Kit.

And he was as important as they had threatened. Suddenly I started noticing him on TV all the time, usually those stuffy occasions where the white bemedalled suits of the men are overshadowed only by the monumental hair of their women.

They did come to our house too, usually in the afternoons. Nee or I always took Kit out then anyway, either for him hang out with European friends or more often swimming or skating or to join a gymnastics class upstairs at the Emporium.

There was some comedy in their diminutive motorcade, with its single police outrider, struggling down Sukumvit 71, before pulling into the compound of our ungainly high rise. The driver would go off to eat on our vital Soi and then gossip with the condo security guards while he sat at a Carrefour trestle table reading our books in the otherwise bare, main room. She and Catherine working hard in the study.

One afternoon after the lesson the three of them slogged up Sukumvit in the Benz to meet Kit and me at Phrom Pong before we all went on to Pan Pan on soi 33 to have a pizza. Entering the restaurant reminded me of the time I had seen the prime minister there with his daughter and her friends; deep wais and scurrying staff stumbling to neurotically reposition already perfectly arranged napkins. We talked of many things; he in modulated American flecked English and she in varieties of pidgin. I steered a little near the waterfall trying to understand the minutiae of Chinese immigration and their ethnic domination of the Thais but otherwise he was charming and informative.

He was by now old though how much so was difficult to tell. Years of good living and surgery conspired to give him a kind of unsettling agelessness. As the younger scion of a banking dynasty he had studied economics in America and then worked in Thai industries during the heady tiger years though he ruefully bemoaned the splendid wealth of his older brother. His life now seemed to consist of a kind of pallid internationalism, friendship and support toward those who had to govern, and making merit via donations to Wats in different parts of the country. One in Pai I remember in particular.

She was an orphan of complicated lives.

At one point while He was telling us they were part of the delegation that would meet the royal dignitary flying in from Scandinavia that very evening she grasped Kit's hands turning them palms down. He was a wild creature then and she visibly recoiled from the speckled dirt under his nails.

It went on for a while like this. It was a faux pas when I leaned on his patronage to transfer Min’s brother in law from the post office job on soi 23 to Lopburi to be near the wider family and imposition again when we asked him arranged for kilos of our documents for the Italian lawsuit to be shipped via air for next to nothing.

Then quite suddenly she stopped studying.

Catherine said it was because of my nightlife.

We would still bump into them accidentally but cordially in malls. The last time the day before we left. Then we drank a coffee together and he asked me with curious fathomlessness what I did in my free time before wishing us a good journey home.

Eyes obsidian.

 

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Dana
May 18, 2007, 15:26

"Eyes obsidian." Perfect.

Now here is the universal mystery. How do the girlfriends look past the eyes obsidian? Hearts obsidian.
Marc Holt
May 19, 2007, 12:09

I'm sorry, but this story left me totally puzzled. Who and what is it about Icarus? You have left too many puzzles, no names, and no coherent story line. Your opening paragraph was limper than a piece of spaghetti. The storyline just didn't grip me at all. I'm afraid I didn't even bother reading to the end.
Dana
May 19, 2007, 15:42

Well Mr. Holt I would like to defend this story. I believe I have read it before someplace else. It is true that more description and exposition could have been included but for me it was enough and I enjoyed the picture painted of unlikely fish meeting, mixing, and then separating again; as if in a dream. I read it through. I admit it was not a sleigh ride downhill, but I thought it was fine. There was an ethereal, hard to define quality to it that I liked.
Mike
May 19, 2007, 16:21

ThailandStories.com is basically a writing site for writers where readers can come and enjoy whatever they find they like to read. It is a very diverse site on many of the myriad topics relating to Thailand. As we all know not every story will be enjoyed by everyone. We all have our different tastes in what we want to read. The site is laid out in such a way as to facilitate a reader's tastes, and it is very easy to skip over what one finds they have no interest in reading, conversely it is also very easy to find those stories and authors one enjoys reading. We never expected our readers to read everything on the site and we know most never will, but that is precisely the point in having such a diverse amount of reading material based on Thailand here. ThailandStories is much broader in scope than most sites like it. SO there is something for almost anyone to enjoy. If not, click to something else that may be what you'd prefer to read. Most readers will find something they can enjoy here. That is the point of it all. :-)
Mike
May 19, 2007, 16:38

As Dana pointed out a while back in describing one of his earlier pieces here, it's a vignette. Icarus's pieces are just that ... vignettes. Small glimpses of a moment in time. They are not stories in the sense that they have plots, lots of characters, reams of dialogue, and a storyline easily categorized. They are small pieces of that. I see them as mood pieces, a blend of prose and poetry, and sometimes a small look, a glimpse, into the absurdities of life.
Bill
May 20, 2007, 01:37

I must admit for my limited supply of brain cells this piece was also a little somewhat of a challenge to digest Marc. And having said that it doesn’t surprise me one bit that Dana came to its defence. Time these days is mostly an issue with me (the lack of it) so I can’t be too judgemental on anything I read, as I appreciate some pieces need more TLC and attention to detail over others. It’s just for me I need to be drawn in as opposed to fighting my way in to a particular story.

However if I’ve learnt anything from Dana it’s that by approaching ideas and objects from off-beat angles one can (on occasions) conjure up a diversity of stunning sets of images form each independent reader. This to the writers credit here as the weird for some can be something full of wonder for others.

How can one define good writing? I know what I like and will go on praising anything I personally think is good but will be less critical of the ones I struggled with as like Mike states above we all have our different tastes in what we want to read.

So on that note: Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us Icarus, you put the weird or fantasy of writing words to good use here.
chuckwoww
May 20, 2007, 03:16

I do a lot of reading. All kinds of stuff. From Samuel Beckett to Stephen King. They are both good writers but I can't explain why. I enjoy Icarus but I can see how he may not be everybody's cup of literary tea. Ethereal....good word Dana.
Dana
May 20, 2007, 05:42

Tastes differ: from Samuel Beckett to Stephen King (see Mr. Woww above) is quite a range.

The novel MURPHY by Beckett is one of my favorite books and the first line -- 'The sun shone, having no alternative, on the nothing new.' is one of the great first lines of literature.

On the other hand I can not force my hands to pick up a Stephen King book in a bookstore. I wouldn't mind someone seeing my walking down the street with a Japanese comic book, but I draw the line at Stephen King. Objectively speaking my Stephen King antipathy is probably wrong but --so many books, so little time--our stupid prejudices are a part of our lives.

But at least I know my limits; and do not offer opinions or criticism on Mr. King in a public forum--I am ignorant and I know it.

Tastes can also change. When I was a teenager I used to enjoy slogging through thick Elizabethan novels. One of my favorites was THE WHITE RAJAH; a book I have never been able to find since. Now I can not get two chapters into these thick wordy descriptive novels before falling asleep. Another book I remember from the sixth grade was REYNARD THE RED FOX; another book I have not been able to track down. People change, tastes change, times change; if someone does not find appealing something you find appealing it is just a reality you have to deal with. These matters do not admit of compromise and almost always lead to disappointment. For those reasons I have stopped enthusing about or recommending books, or movies, or restaurants. Maybe that is one reason why as you age you get quieter. Just tired of the useless disagreements, and loud noises, and foolish expenditures of energy.

"What do you mean you didn't love the unique writing style in Herman Melville's novel MOBY DICK . . . ok, just forget it."
Marc Holt
May 20, 2007, 07:49

Compare Dana's Emerald Eyes to The VIP. Dana's vignette set the scene powerfully in the first sentence. The reader could picture it immediately. With this vignette, I was left wondering throughout who Icarus was talking about. The rest of the story suffered, in my opinion, as a result. Please don't get me wrong. The writing style is good. The prose excellent. But it just didn't grab me. I will read more from Icarus to try and get a better feel for his writing. Perhaps his other stories will draw me in better.
chuckwoww
May 20, 2007, 13:46

Off the topic of Icarus and his elusive shorthand style but I think Stephen King is an excellent writer. I do not begrudge him his success. His stories are all well structured and rarely dull. There is nothing very demanding about them which makes him very good at what he does. It's not great literature but it sells very well at airports. The only think that pisses me off about King is he's so damn prolific. It seems unfair.
Mike
May 20, 2007, 13:54

On the topic of King and writing: has anyone else read his 'On Writing'? Lots of interesting tips on writing, his thoughts on writing, and little insights into how he writes and his life as a popular writer. I read it twice in a few months time. Very interesting and educational.
ray
May 24, 2007, 10:37

King has a bunch of hacks writing for him. He comes up with the stories and they type it down. Same with Patterson. That don't make him any worse of a writer, just a more industrious one. Personally I like writers that type their own words.
Ikkrang
June 2, 2007, 04:31

I think a lot has to do with context.

Icarus just started to publish here, with seemingly un-connected 'vignets'

Unconnected, they are somewhat mysterious, vague, floating. It is my feeling they will eventually start to connect, like these sky divers, starting to link hands, until a pattern can be made out. Neither Rome, nor BKK was built within a day.
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