Short Time Girl

By : Julian
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Short time girl
do you ever remember
back to when you were
first in love?

When the fat drunken customers
fail and cry
and beg you
for so many things.
You can barely remember them all.
Things or customers

When you were twelve
you knew
that there would be only one
for you
and you the only one for him.
He has been and gone,
you one of many
and now him.

When the customers want to talk
it should cost
more than the sex.
The sex only wearies
the body,
the talk wearies the soul.

Short time girl,
What do they seek?
The orgasm
that makes them sad?
The company
that makes them more lonely?

Soon, the bus home
for Songkran.
The only long time
in a short time girl's year.

 

© Julian. All rights reserved by the author.


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Rating

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Comments / Feedback

Rob
December 13, 2006, 21:13

Great poem - great ending!
Rob
December 14, 2006, 01:21

Another thought, Julian - the content of this poem could be classified as 'teen'. This would have allowed you to post it in the main poetry section and it would then appear on the home page. I emailed the webmasters about this with regard to my Bangkok Don Juan, and they said that Google would not allow mature content to appear on a home page. The result of this is that fewer people will find your poem - which is a pity, because it is an good read.
Julian
December 14, 2006, 17:24

Thanks Rob, first effort at poetry since I was 19, you can imagine what that one was like!
I wrote it pretty much for myself anyway but it could hardly be called hard core, I've seen a lot more graphic stuff on Teen.
simon
May 28, 2008, 09:21

nice reading,well done
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